Teen book need helpful tips!?

WOW. honestly, that was fantastic! I like how everything unraveled so quickly, it makes everything so much more interesting! Oh and, did you *have to end this at the best part:P jk.-I was so getting into the story! Yea, but it's really great! I wouldn't call you so much a young author, cuz you really seem to have some experience in writting. Very creative also, nice job:)