Nice story! I can tell it was well throught out. But would ur teacher approve of the word "dammit" in your story? how about changing it to "darn" or something. I think you should title it "Noel is my name, Christmas is my game!" lol...kinda funny/cheesy or you could title it something like "the day i became proud of my name" hope i helped!
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