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BRAVO... very good i love all the detail!! the theme was about slavery but also about empowerment ... but to me it seemed kind of deeper than that.... of course we all understand what it reads but if you read between the lines it could be about someone who has lived a hard life in todays society for example a battered person standing up to their abuser... i loved the poem .. very deep from both points of view!! bravo if you wrote i book i would definitly read it i love how you really think out what you are writing about ...